Ohio Impromptu

Lightning* Alcohol* Anyway, I liked this a lot. You drew the characters really well and placed them in the story perfectly. I don't really have much to say except for ...

At the beginning I was convinced this was some sort of fanfiction-deal for the Truman Show, but that's irrelevant right now. I liked this, although there were some things that ...

'Bear-like' perhaps?

You spelled wondrous wrong. :cry: If you think this is bad, you should see my English class. *shudder*

This is the sort of thing that starts interplanetary wars. Just think yourself lucky that we haven't offended Mars yet; he is the mightiest of all planets. Seriously though, I ...

I can't put them in order. -Dead Poets Society -Almost Famous -V for Vendetta -The Nightmare Before Christmas -The Shawshank Redemption

This could've maybe gone in Sci-Fi, but the only thing that puts it there is being set in the future. Enjoy. Chapter One. “Growing reports of vandalism in the Southern ...

I saw this movie today and I'm still pretty undecided about it. I will agree that without Mr. Jackson this movie would not fly (I can do it too). I ...

I'm not sure how to base my opinion here. On one hand, I didn't like it because it seemed unnecessary to write something about this level of suffering without it ...

I'd have four houses in different parts of the world. One in Alaska, one in Mexico, one in either Berlin or Moscow, and one here in Perth. Of course it'll ...

I like this, and I'd like to say it was predictable, but it wasn't. It's obvious halfway through the story that something bad is coming, but somehow the most logical ...

Essentially, you have a good story here, but the execution of it could do with some work. Just a suggestion, but I think you should scrap the prologue and work ...

If I had any idea what was going on here I'd still be confused. I don't, so I'll just pretend that I totally agree with everything and that this piece ...

This chapter is vital to the development of the story, but I'm not sure I pulled it off properly. I think its a bit too short, so it will most ...

Late at night is great for me too, but I don't get to do it very often. Mid-morning (like 10 onward) seems to get me going aswell, but only if ...